October 6, 2013

Wonders of Nature

I'm sitting here.
The train drives me my way.
I'm passing the most different landscapes.

There are the plains with the green grass and the beautiful flowers.
Sometimes there are animals who are eating the tasty grass.
Cows, horses and sheep.
They're all living together in peace.
I spot some trees on the plains.
Every tree stands alone but that makes the picture even more beautiful and idyllic.

Then, I pass a deep dark forest.
There are lots of trees which are standing close together.
It seems as if they're hugging each other.
So many trees and so many different trees living close together.
Friendly and in peace.
No tree distributes another kind of tree.
The forest looks very beautiful but mysterious.
I can't look deep inside the forest because it's so dark.
But I think, a nice forest has to be dark and has to stay untouched.

Now, I pass a big city.
I can't spot a single green stain in it.
No trees, not one.
I see the rooftops of tons of houses.
The whole city seems to be very industrial.
I wonder if there's a park inside this grey hole.
Some big cities can be really pretty
At nighttime, all the lights are shining bright and bring colourful light into the usually grey city.
But the city I'm passing is not like that.
It's actually really ugly.
I wouldn't want to live in a city like that.

Now it starts to rain.
Not only a little but very heavy, hard raindrops hit the window glass and take my view from the world outside.
I close my eyes and start to dream..

3 comments:

  1. I'm sorry, sweetie, but I have to! :3
    It's "sheep" not "sheeps", I think you use "city" a bit too much aaand one tiny thing at the end: it's "heavily" instead of "heavy" ;)
    Don't get me wrong, I'm not doing this to embarrass you, it's just that I want you to know so you won't make those two mistakes again next time and yeah c: <3

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    1. Sorry but I don't quite get why it's "heavily" in this case :s Could you please write me, an uneducated little sock, a short explanation? c:

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    2. Naja, also ich hab das beim ersten Mal so verstanden - jetzt finde ich, dass man das unterschiedlich sehen kann.
      Anyway, there you go: Also wenn sich das noch auf den "Now it starts to rain" - Satz bezieht, muss es "heavily" sein, da es hier kein Adjektiv, sondern ein Adverb ist, das sich auf das Starten wieder bezieht. Wie das mit Adverbien halt so ist. Genauso wie man sagt: "nicely done" und nicht "nice done", es bezieht sich auf das Verb des vorherigen Satzes, deswegen braucht man ein Adverb. Macht das Sinn? Ich hoffe.
      Ansonsten wenn sich das auf die "raindrops" bezieht, dann passt es - wobei der Satz dann trotzdem meiner Meinung nach etwas... strange ist, aber wayne :D
      Ich hoffe, das hat dir irgendwie geholfen c:

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